The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, the wonderful desperation in this made me want to go find the sparrow for you! Delightful poem.
05/31/10
Wow--this is beautiful! The emotion in this is so real, so poignant, and I love the analogy of the sparrow. Very well done.
05/31/10
Very well done! The sparrow is perfect; while we may be anxious for its return, we must be gently patient and wait. Excellent descriptions. Great meter and rhyme, without pushing it. Wonderful to read. Thank you.
06/01/10
Oh this is so beautiful - what a wonderful message. I particularly love the penultimate verse. Thank you so much.
06/02/10
It always amazes me that you're still in Advanced because your poems are always MASTERfully written. I seek you name out during hinting time just so I can be blessed by your beautiful words (even when I don't have time to read anyone else's or time to leave comments). You didn't disappoint this time either. Lovely, visual, emotional. Well done.