The Official Writing Challenge
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You never fail to create colorful characters and in this case fleshed them out with dialogue.This interaction kept my attention. Toward the end I wanted less exclamations and more inner turmoil, but that may just be selfish on my part, and or I wanted it to end differently. But I think I get it? The daughter is the story the mother wishes to write,"control." If so, you have made an excellent point!

You exhibit a style and voice that is rich with color. Amen.
Writers block - malady of mind, love it! This was not only professional in every respect, it was giftedly absorbing.