The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
A delightful read. Thanks so much for sharing!
09/12/05
A great entry. If you separated the paragraphs it would be easier on the eyes. Also, be careful of using the (;) too much. Most of the time a period will do. Thank you for sharing this with us.
09/13/05
What a fun person you sound like! I am at that same stage in life and could relate. Thanks for sharing.
09/13/05
From one empty nester to another--the fun is just beginning! Enjoy! In addition to spacing between paragraphs, you might consider grouping several sentences into paragraphs, instead of starting a new line with each new sentence. It will give your piece more "flow."
09/17/05
Very good! Nice read. Thanks! :-)