The Official Writing Challenge
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This felt like a captivating fairytale where I was completely enthralled, my mind not daring to wander, for I didn't want to miss a word!
I liked this. Refreshing ride. "Not a ladder, but the breath I see." Cool.
That was beautiful. I've always wanted to have an eagle's wings. :)
I don't know how I missed reading this one before. Love it - I live where eagles are abundant and I never tire of watching them soar on the thermals. - Great analogy! And congrats!
Benjamin-- I love this stanza,
"I cannot force my heart to rise
Or climb to heaven with an urge;
I have to float upon the heat,..."
Congratulations on your "highly commended" award!