The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/10
Wonderful wonderful Gospel poem. My hearty really resounded with the truth of every line. Excellent.
05/29/10
Whoops!! - meant 'heart' not 'hearty'!!
06/01/10
Excellent article. One of my favorite sentences was “Cursed on a tree, breaks the curse on creation”. I liked your approach on the topic. Inspiration does indeed come from God, and, as you said in the last paragraph, we need to listen for his whisper and obey it.
06/01/10
Masterful and deep.
06/01/10
I'm in awe! Exquisite, deep, powerful, extremely well-written, poetic, hopeful, gospel, timely.
I'll never write anything as wonderful...but, I'll keep trying.

Mona
06/03/10
I am so glad to see this beautiful poem awarded a place! Congratulations
06/03/10
Lovely, lovely imagery. Well done! Congratulations on your EC!
06/04/10
Simply wonderful and amazing! I love this,
"High on a cross overlooking the nations
One paid a price—God’s redemption for all,
Cursed on a tree, breaks the curse on creation,
God’s love and justice reverses the fall—
Drown not the whisper but answer the call."
Congrats, Vincent, on your level award AND editor's choice!
06/09/10
Thanks to your inspiration, I was inspired by this winning entry. The flow and rhyme seemed effortless, though it's obvious much thought went into your selective words. Congratulations on the recognition given to this talented piece.