The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/10
This is really good - I could not stop reading once I started. Beautiful descriptions of Greece and poignant descriptions of pain and struggles. Some wonderful lines - I loved 'yet after a week my notepad overflowed with empty pages!'
Once I started reading, I couldn't stop either. This could be a novel. I want to go back there, I want to know more about Maria, her story, the relationship that's developing. I loved the setting... you created a very large story from such a small window of words. More please.
06/01/10
This is lovely from beginning to end. You pictured the scene so well I felt I was there, and the characters are beautifully developed. Loved it!
06/02/10
I was sad when this ended. Absolutely enthralling - lovely descriptions, amazing inspiration. I am in awe.
06/03/10
I could feel the sea breeze as I watched this unfold before me. Absolutely beautiful in everything. Love this, Mari!
06/03/10
Oh my. Kind of leaves me breathless. I'm standing to the side, looking at your canvas. Awesome.