The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
Brilliant parallel - every detail! Well-done!
09/12/05
Oh, very good! This is a highly enjoyable read! Wouldn't be suprised by a win!
09/13/05
Excellent! and great minds think alike mine to is on Jonah.
09/13/05
Excellent! A wonderful, totally believable, modern depiction! Karen
09/13/05
A virtuoso piece of writing!
09/14/05
FANTASTIC! I'd like to see Jonas repent in the closet as Jonah did in the whale.
Well done! Very Jonah-esque. Thanks for sharing!
09/14/05
Very nicely done analogy!
09/14/05
Good Job! I really liked the irony of the painting at the end.
Makes me look back at all those "one of those days" I've had in the past and wonder what I was being disobedient about! Congratulations on crossing over completly to the light side (even if only for a week!:))
Think there's enough Deb's in here? Guess Deb Porter should be next to add to the list, huh? lol
09/16/05
LOL. Really well done! Loved every bit of it. And err, Jonas did repent in the cupboard, that's why he headed for Chinatown. The painting at the end is a memorable touch, too.
09/17/05
I loved this! Great work!
09/17/05
Well done. Very nice! Could have a chance this week! Time will tell!
09/19/05
What a great article !