The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/10
Lovely. Don't you want to just 'jump right in'? Great descriptions.
05/29/10
Ahhh...makes me feel so refreshed!
I never wanted to trust in a riptide for inspiration until now. Loved it.
What a great poem of "inspiration" through imagination. It was like being in a Disneyland for the mind, I was at that ocean! :)
06/03/10
You really caught it, Verna! This is great! And isn't that just the way it feels when you've written from God's heart?
Congratulations!
06/03/10
I actually can feel the warm salt water.
Verna, you're just top-notch.
Congrats!


Mona
06/03/10
Beautiful. Just beautiful. Congratulations on the EC!
06/03/10
Your analogy and sensory images are wonderful in this! Congratulations dear, Verna!
06/04/10
Congratulations, Verna!
Do you feel better now?
06/09/10
Great imagery throughout this poetic message. Congratulations on your placements with this winning entry.