The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/10
This is great! Lots of fun. I like your comparisons and word choices. The rhythm flows well too.
05/27/10
A great poem with some wonderful rhymes and some very interesting comparisons. I liked this - thankyou
05/27/10
Congratulations - glad it did so well!
05/27/10
Congratulations on your place in EC.. great poem.. loved it!
05/27/10
Vincent, congrats on this wonderful piece.
I read it earlier in the week. Today, I read again and stopped to realize just how good this is and how very on topic.
In fact, of all the entries I've read this week, this one speaks most clearly of the writer's life to me.
You really nailed it.

Mona
Excellent, on target, funny, and yet profound. Congratulations!
05/27/10
Congratulations on your EC!

A little side note: Your entry is called Circus Act and your last name is Lyons. I got an additional chuckle out of that!
05/27/10
Great rhythm and analogy of the writer's life! Congratulations!
05/27/10
Super congrats, Vincent, on your ribbon and Editor's Choice award! This is excellent! I love the images in this entertaining poem!
05/28/10
Congrats on your EC Vincent. Loved the circus metaphor you used. This is beautifully crafted.