The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
I don't understand this story, even after 3 readings. I wish I knew what you were ging for here; I see a very interesting story struggling to get out.
09/17/05
Certainly good use of the language. Also, polished in presentation. But, alas, I got lost in too many jumps of the story. Of course, I'm not as competant as I should be! rofl!