The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/10
This is wonderfully sensitive and deep.
Not sure exactly what you were shooting for with this entry...perhaps just a monk's reflection? (sorry, just didn't get it) BUT, I did love this, "in the mist of the lonely hours,
in the melting of the candlelight,
in this aging of the night and in the seasoning of the soul." THESE words are hauntingly beautiful, and I GET them!
05/23/10
This was serenely beautiful...I smiled all the way through thinking I knew this was the so missed voice of Jim Mcwhinnie until I saw he had made the 1st comment...in my eyes this is a great comparison:)
Lovely... I really love the voice you captured here, and the hearts of men trying to capture a piece of infinity and describe it in the finite - a task so difficult, but so inspiring to our finite hearts!