The Official Writing Challenge
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05/20/10
This is delightful tale, wonderfully authentic and well researched, spoiled only by the missing preposition in the first paragraph. I could almost smell the sweat
Your description truly takes us there to each scene - terrific! So realistic. How often do we writers get our story ideas from the most mundane moments of each day. You illustrated this perfectly with Kipling.
Well written and very descriptive. I enjoyed the read. Good job.
Love it, loved it. I was there, it was so real. Well done, very well done indeed.
I've always loved Rudyard Kipling, so I really loved reading this. You made it seem so authentic thank you. Keep writing.