The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow...this made me all warm and fuzzy inside! Adored the gentle and loving relationship between husband and wife. Very well written in my book :)
05/22/10
Except for the fact that I love my own life, I'd be quite jealous. Well written and so nice to read.
You have a wonderful source for inspiration...and need very little sleep, obiously! Nice story, well-written.
05/24/10
Very real, I could easily see it happening this way, or is that wishful thinking.....
05/25/10
Aww, what a sweet husband! :D I love it when he says, "I'm not really awake." That just catches me as funny. :)

Fast-paced and great for the topic. Good job!