The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/10
I love this, and "totally" get your message. :) Your words, rhyme, meter (in fact, everything) is perfect. This flows beautifully. ..and of course this would be my favorite stanza,
"yet this path is but for a few,
those who take the time to woo
the words that wing, and set them down
to sparkle in a royal crown" You brightened my day with this. :)
This is absolutely amazing. Every word drips with understanding, insight, and beautiful expression. Wow.
Oh! Wonderful imagery! Beautiful pictures that touch the heart! We've had some really good poems this week, and I think this one is excellent!
05/26/10
A wonderful poem. Well done.