The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this story. It reminded me of a professor I had that was considered harsh by others, but one of my favorites. Good job on your title.
05/18/10
I had to smile at the "critique our critique of the critique." :) Your characterization of Mrs. G warmed my heart! You kept my interest throughout with this well-written entry! Very good!
05/18/10
I like the voice, and the 1st person POV works really well!

A technical glitch - you shifted into flashback from the chapel when she heard that Mrs. G was leaving, but didn't shift back into real time to say goodbye.

I really like this, the humor of the "mirror in the mirror" scene was well done. A joy to read. :)
05/22/10
I find the above three comments within the framework designated by Faithwriters; however, they were definitely too short to be of much worth in improving your writing ability. Please review syntax of your article at your leisure (and before sending another entry to the Writing Challenge).

Very critiquely yours,

Mrs. G

PS - you get another "A"