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Topic: The Critique/Review (for writers) (05/06/10)
TITLE: Editing the Dragon
By Michael Joshua
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Dorothy: “You ended that sentence with a preposition just to bait me.”
Blanche: “What would I do that for?”
Golden Girls – Season 7 – “The Pope’s Ring”
Editing and critiquing… It is absolutely the worst part of the writing process. But if a writer is going to be successful, he or she must learn to look at the work in progress, take it apart and put it back together.
With the weapon firmly in my
I laughed, which only served to make him even more
There was no blood, but
The dragon seemed
Then, from behind me, I heard my mom’s voice, “Jimmy! What are you doing?”
She reached down and picked up the dragon that I had been fighting. As she removed the pencil from the
“You clean up this room right now; pencils all over the floor… And why are there staples everywhere?”
“Do we have one about dragons?”
When mom left the
“It’s lunchtime. Maybe we can play again later.”
I closed the door behind me as I headed to the table.
I swear I heard a
“Later,” I muttered at the doorway. “We can play again later.”
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