The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/10
I laughed all the way through this. Wonderful, fun characters.
Love the 'bun twisted too tight' and 'prairie dog' examples.
Killer ending! Icy hot, really!

Mona
05/17/10
You created a fun story with these ladies. I felt like I was sitting around the table and laughing with them. Nice job.
05/18/10
A warm, light touch in your dialogue. I won't say any more in case my mords get wuddled.
This took a lot of thought and skill to weave together so many funny lines.