The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/10
I like the progression in this piece. The ending gives us a lot to ponder and calls for action.
Good job.

Mona
WOW! Heavy stuff. Scary too. I like the way you did the main points and provided examples.
05/17/10
Some great points of view here. How we so need to read that book.
You threw me at first by your allusion to Shakespeare and I had to go back and re-read it once I realised you were talking about the Scriptures.
VERY unique and insightful. This very issue has been sirring within me and now I KNOW to get busy! :)
05/17/10
Ooh, good stuff! I would love to see another story or a novel come from the library setting. Any chance you'll be opening a thread on the forums after the judging is over? This sounds like it would be a great conversation piece.
05/18/10
I also took a while to realise that you were coming through with the bible - but then I'm a very slow reader.
A good strong conclusion nonetheless.
Very unique approach to the topic...a sermon without preaching. Excellent job.