The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
Sitting here in awe. Wow. So,well done. I loved the way you handled the narrative.
09/13/05
This sentence: "I was determined to change reality, to make her stay, and to make her well..." is perfection. Fifteen words that eprfectly capture Marcus's heart.
09/14/05
With all the gods out there, I wish you would have used the name Jesus. Nevertheless, a brilliant piece of work:)
09/14/05
You've submitted a beautiful entry. Bittersweet, this piece touched the emotions while leaving the reader something to think about. A good contender.
Blessings, Lynda
09/17/05
sad story. great writing. well captured emotion. good work!