The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/10
Cool story! It was very creative to put it in a play/stage type setting.
I like the references to "I AM" and how He, as "The Reviewer," gave them advice on how to deepen their stories.

I noticed once that "his" was written in reference to Danielle instead of "her." But no big deal.

Great job and very "on topic!"
05/15/10
Creative? Yes. Page turner? No. Girl's name with a boy's story got this reader confused to the point of distraction to the story. However, if ths story's setting was on "Judgement Day", which I believe was stated...then they have no second chance to come back next week...which was also a bit perplexing; but YES, it Was creative, unique and ...different.
05/15/10
I liked this piece because it emphasized that we write for an Audience of One - the great I AM. Clever setting and approach to the topic.
I loved your story about THE REVIEWER and how you brought everything together so perfectly. Very well written and right on point.