The Official Writing Challenge
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Great continuation in the story of Barak and Axella! This is going to make a nice series. :) I like how you portray the power of prayer here while still weeding in the topic. I look forward to the next installment.
Great description of all the action going on here. Not sure about some of the theology presented, but I did like how God used the prayers of the father. Read like a Frank Peretti novel. Good job.
Science fiction readers and all other fiction lovers will probably dig this the most! - but since it's not my cup of tea, and I can't make heads nor tails of it...I'll just pass on by and thank you for sharing your talent with us. It takes all kinds of writing to satisfy all kinds of readers' with different tastes, Right? God Bless.
I enjoyed this very much. I loved the gaurdian angel. Keep writing.