The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/10
This is so sad, but is the reality for some. Your beginning starts powerfully with "the Author of the Ages." It's sad that we don't often see the power available to us with "the Author of the Ages."
05/10/10
Oh - this is incredibly powerful. Wonderfully important message and vivid imagery.
Great poem! I loved the imagery you used, and the rich picture of the unfinished story.
I would suggest that you add punctuation - it makes a poem flow more smoothly, and easier to read.
Good job on this one - keep up the good work!