The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a fun poem. I could totally relate to it being your only child, then later realizing in needed a sibling. Well done.
Oh, I like the ending - great imagery for a great punch to finish off the poem!
I think this poem could be even more beautiful if you added a little more imagery through the poem.
I like the picture of your first book being your "firstborn". Keep up the good work!