The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/10
This "Perfect Poem" beautifully states the poet's heart and "mission. "If this was a mission for myself -- I think I’d settle for a crumb, -- But I am searching for a jewel - To bring a little love to some!" Nice work AND message!
05/08/10
I really enjoy the comparison of your brain to a messy desk--what a great image!

This isn't a WRONG thing, just an adjustment that I had to make--the metered quatrains made me expect a rhyming poem, and my brain kept looking for a rhyme.

I'm willing to bet that you've got that perfect poem somewhere in your 'desk'--I hope to read it some day! This is very well done.
Thank you for the perfect poem. Your desk sounds like mine and by chance if I find a gem I give God the glory.