The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/10
Wow, the inner turmoil of your MC is tangible. What a struggle to try to regain that "former glory." I like the richness of the historic setting. Great work here!
05/13/10
Wow, Dee. I LOVED this entry. I went looking for the author as soon as the entries were posted. :) I wish you would have hinted. Outstanding writing.

So authentic and very well done! A gorgeous piece.
05/13/10
Well done Dee, for you've depicted the external environment of your MC and his inner turmoil with real skill. I also like his awareness of how past glories can carry unanticipated weight.