The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/10
You must have felt deflated when your eyes saw your grandmother's "writing".
This was filled with great descriptive phrases, nice flow and I found myself curious about the contents of her manuscript--so for me the ending was a surprise.
05/07/10
A sad ending. I thought parts were a little too wordy. just the opinion of a beginner. Very well written.