The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/10
I love the ending. It echoes the beginning.
Oh how I relate to Kaci. For me submitting is also super scary. But I'll remember your words and hopefully one day i will be brave enough to submit.
05/03/10
I enjoyed your description of the birth and growth of the story. Well written!
05/03/10
I definitely agree you have to write from "the breathings of your heart..." Wordsworth wrote some of the loveliest lines in all of poetry, and I loved how you used this one. Good job.
05/04/10
I REALLY like this one. The voice of the muse sounds a bit too close to home. I'm sure many of us here in faithwriter's land can relate. Creative and well structured...welcome back, YOUR muse has slept long enough.
05/05/10
Oh, creative work with this MC. Love your title here.
05/05/10
The craft of writing...you captured it perfectly from beginning to end with your patient (or not) MC. Awesome!
Congratulations in placing in the top 30 overall.