The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title prompted me to read this entry first of all the Bon Voyage entries. And, man, if this is the calibre I'm up against, I'm sunk! AMAZING work!
Very well done. Loved the description and the flow of the story line.
I love, love, love the droll wit of your narrator! I would change only two small things: the second sentence should read " father and I..." and I really don't think you need the verse tacked on to the end. Your story was fine without it, and it seemed anti-climactic. Beautiful job of writing!
Oops, I meant to say " father and me..."
Very, very good.
I love this wonderfully written piece! The verse did seem a bit out of place. Still, this is excellent work!
A well written, enjoyable, lighthearted story. Loved the line 'make voluntary dinner reservations.' I've only recently learnt that fishing has nothing to do with catching fish! :-)
My favorite line was "A simple 'Peace be still,' would have been great." :-) Enjoyed it!
Great piece! I think the roll of the ship upon the ocean would make me want to toss my cookies, too:)
You've taken me on my first fishing outing! Thanks, it was fun!
Great job on this Ben! I always look forward to your stories! Thanks for sharing!
A great fish tale :)
Classic Benji ... very nicely done, as usual.