The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this is intense. I enjoy reading something in which I learn so much.
04/30/10
You are a master poet! This is wonderful. I loved the history you "revisited" with this. It truly is a "work of art."
Great great story! Gave me goosebumps and would have loved to have been at that park and met that girl. Felt as though I was that elderly woman reminiscing. Powerfully done and well written.
05/03/10
Very well done. Beautifully told story. I love the description of the old lady's hands.
05/04/10
A very moving piece, with a story that needs to be remembered. The rhythm moved along beautifully and your word choices were strong and clear. Great work!
05/05/10
I loved everything about this poem--the chosen words, the rhythm and rhyme, and the story told throughout. Terrific!
Congratulations in placing in the top 30 overall.
I really enjoy your style of writing. The topic you chose kept my interest from beginning to end. Excellent work! Looking forward to more of your creative style in the future :)
06/01/10
Outstanding, innovative, and educational all at the same time. This is a winner for sure!