The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the whole piece, but the last paragraph really rang true for me.
04/30/10
Thanks for sharing your viewpoints on the craft of writing.
Effective illustration of the power of group encouragement and inspiration.
You made me feel as though I knew these people.:)

I still think the character, Joy, should have been from Brooklyn.

I know you had fun writting this- it is fun to read,
I remember you saying that you started a writing group at your church. Could that real life experience have been your inspiration for this story? :)

Thanks for sharing. I think it's a great idea to start groups like these to discuss and motivate each other. Writing can be a lonely craft otherwise.
Hi Josh, Yes this IS my writing group. I knew not many would appreciate the different characters, but my writing group sure loved it. Barbara (above) is also a FW and is a member of my writing group. She wants to be from Brooklyn...lol...I am Aspereen Ryder...(aka Aspiring Writer), the name of our group.
thanks for your comment. I loved your story!