The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the whole piece, but the last paragraph really rang true for me.
Thanks for sharing your viewpoints on the craft of writing.
Effective illustration of the power of group encouragement and inspiration.
You made me feel as though I knew these people.:)

I still think the character, Joy, should have been from Brooklyn.

I know you had fun writting this- it is fun to read,
I remember you saying that you started a writing group at your church. Could that real life experience have been your inspiration for this story? :)

Thanks for sharing. I think it's a great idea to start groups like these to discuss and motivate each other. Writing can be a lonely craft otherwise.
Hi Josh, Yes this IS my writing group. I knew not many would appreciate the different characters, but my writing group sure loved it. Barbara (above) is also a FW and is a member of my writing group. She wants to be from am Aspereen Ryder...(aka Aspiring Writer), the name of our group.
thanks for your comment. I loved your story!