The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/10
This is hilarious! Great job bringing important writing tips to life...
04/29/10
This is wonderful. I chuckled all the way.
04/30/10
Clever, unique and creative...but also a bit mind-boggling and confusing. The first pragraph, for instance, reads - "The street was quiet and still"...but then goes on to say "Rumbling thunder, rain hitting pavement like marbles and lightning flshing" (not so quiet after all, right?)

Anyhoo...it was a welcome relief from some "Ho Hum, Non-Action" type storis that put me to sleep with boredom. So I give you a high mark even though I was lost somewhere out in left field, plus some Kudos! (*.*)
04/30/10
Really enjoyed this and loved the ending.

Thanks for sharing this valuable information with us beginner writers also!
05/02/10
Awesome creativity! I am amazed. Very, very fun.
05/06/10
Josh, I just wanted to stop back in and offer my congratulations on your EC!
05/06/10
Who said try to avoid cliches? Of course you did such a marvelous tongue in cheek rendition it's no wonder you received the well-earned EC. Congratulations.
05/06/10
. . . Joshua, please . . . please . . . turn this into a book. Just tell me where to send my money for one . . . my, it was over, far too quickly: darn word limit!

Congratulations, Joshua, on your 1st Place Win.

Bryan.
05/06/10
Smiling ear-to-ear (a cliche
but appropriate) so happy for you, Joshuah. Congratulations - so well deserved.
05/06/10
Josh is back!!! Congratulations. I'm confused but that's the point, right? Good job!
05/06/10
Oooh Josh! Way to go - welcome back! I loved this show and not tell approach and a very enjoyable read to boot. Congratulations!!!
05/06/10
No wonder I didn't get an Editor's Choice this week. What a wonderful story plot!Congratulations on a well deserved win.

And, Josh, welcome to Masters. You finally landed where you have always belonged.
05/06/10
Huge congrats, Josh. Very, very funny!
05/06/10
Congrates. Heading to Master's? So relieved. It's hard to imagine two polish christian writer's on the same level. if I'm wrong forgive me from where-ever you land.
05/06/10
Josh... this story is AMAZING!! ...and I LOVE the title! I was SO EXCITED to see you 1st place--Advanced AND 3rd place EDITOR'S CHOICE... Masters Level will be "richer" with you there! Super congrats friend! ...(and just think, I had my picture taken with you way back --before you were famous-- at the FW conference...) :)
05/06/10
Congratulations, Joshua! This was truly amazing. So excited to see you in Master's next week. I think I'll save a copy of this one to keep myself from using cliches.
05/06/10
Congrats Josh...you earned it!
05/06/10
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story was AWESOME! You so deserve that EC! Now move on up here to Masters with the rest of us. :)
05/06/10
For some reason I have the urge to hear you read this with all the voices exaggerated for our amusement. great job and slide on up to Masters. Try not to have a panic attack when you hit submit on your first Masters entry. Of course I'm not speaking from experience at all on this one. :)
05/06/10
Congratulations Josh! So,--- so Creative and on topic. I know you will do as well in Masters.
I look forward to many more entries. Yes, our dreams can reveal a lot!
05/06/10
Well done Josh, glad you decided to write again.
05/06/10
This is great, so creative, funny and also giving awesome writing tips. What a joy to read.
05/07/10
WAY TO GO JOSH!!! Super congratulations, this is awesome.
05/11/10
I loved this story. Please write more!
05/15/10
Wow, great writing, Josh! I was just checking things out from my lengthy absence and this was a delight to see. Congratulations on your success. You are an inspired writer and a great blessing to others. :)