The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute story - you have me wondering what is going to happen next!
Clever: or, should I say crafty?
I love the dialogue. It drew me right into the story.
I was glad for the google search function so I could peek at the boat. :)

this felt like an episode of a late 80's tv show, but in a good way.

I really liked the feel of it, and your take on the theme was original and it worked.

well done. I liked it!
05/05/10
You had me totally involved in your story. …and I was cheering for Matt. What a smart guy. :) You displayed great writer's skill/craft in writing this!