The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/10
Excellent in content, rhyme, flow and in connecting with another poet's heart.
What a wonderful way to describe a poet's heart.
04/30/10
I'd like to describe this beautiful poem as "esoteric." Thank you for penning this for all the poets here at FW! Marvelous words and work here!
04/30/10
Lovely poem with a beautifully expressed message.
05/01/10
Wonderful poem that every writer will relate to. Great rhyme pattern. I especially like the third stanza.
05/03/10
Amen and amen! What a wonderful poem that so echoes the truth I am sure that many of us feel. You have some wonderful lines we can identify with, like

'His fragility exposed,
Fears his treasured thoughts seem valueless to men.'
Thankyou.
Congratulations in placing in the top 30 overall.