The Official Writing Challenge
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Ha! This has me laughing out loud... Great job in using rhymes to add to the humor of this poem.
04/29/10
Have you been spying on me? Yep, I could totally relate. Clever, hilarious, and so true to life. Yipee for such a fun poem!
Oh My, I love it!. It's great and funny and so true. I totally relate.
This is great advice. I find myself using those same excuses!
04/29/10
Love your touch of humor in this well-written poem! Excellent work!
Charming in so many respects. Especially like the truth beneath the light hearted humor and the shared wisdom in your ending. Also learned a new word "ken", so another uplifting moment in your poem!
05/01/10
Oh how cute! I loved your take on this topic...and I'm sure you'll get alot of "Ditto's" on ths, because it happens to us all. Really neat, and spells it out to us so poetically. Good job and an enjoyable read! (*.*)
Yes, other business does get in the way sometimes. But you found the time...this time to write a cute and catchy verse. thanks