The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/10
Wow. Powerful take on the topic. Good "Word".
04/25/10
Love looking back at the 'Before' of the MC and then the 'After'. God's Word never goes out void and you used this foum to show that. Very well done.

Mona
I really like the segue of "He Reads" It fits so well!
04/25/10
Powerful style and talented writing. But, of course, that is not a rarity with your entries.

I, too, loved the "He read" build up.
04/26/10
I like how you have taken us with your MC as his spirit has softened to receive and respond to the scripture. Well done
This is absolutely powerful! I love this:
"No longer a lover but an executioner, he sharpens his words, grinding each to an arrow point, burnished and polished. He flexes the bow, draws back the string and lets loose his wounding words. My heart is the target."

I have chills from reading this... masterful!
Wow that about says it all.
Marvelous...
04/29/10
This is so beautifully written, your word choices are excellent. Congratulations on your Editor's Choice award!
Loved this
The power of the written word spoken!
Congrats
04/29/10
As always, you're one of my faves. :)

What a way with words you have! Awesome.
Congratulations in placing in the top 40 over-all and in the top 15 of your level and receiving an EC! Good job!
05/11/10
Hearty congratulations. You certainly brought this Bible story to life.