The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/10
You had me worried right along with Jill. Your ending was very welcome. Phew! :) I enjoyed this creative and well-crafted story. Your title is perfect!
04/27/10
Great story!
Great story. I knew there was a twist coming but I still enjoyed every word. You teach a valuable lesson.
04/28/10
A terrific mix of suspense and reassurance. Very well written.