The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/10
What a legacy to leave on this earth from a crazy mountain woman! Very good story:)
04/23/10
Loved it. Your choice of passages to illustrate the scenery or the weather was good. I like the idea of someone being affected by the spoken word. Hazy was not so crazy!
04/23/10
So lovely! I really enjoyed your 'Crazy Hazy' character - it shows that God can use the most unexpected people to do His work. Great job!
04/24/10
This whole work was so well done, but I especially loved the descriptions of the memories he had of Hazy reading.
04/24/10
What a character you have brought forth in Hazy. I would read a book about her life any day. Good story.
04/26/10
I felt like I was with your MC, so thanks for the trip.
Well done from beginning to end!
04/29/10
Debbie, Congrats on your Editor's Choice award with this wonderful story!
I would have loved to get to know that old crazy mountain woman. Awesome story.
04/29/10
Outstanding! Congrats on your EC.
04/30/10
Congratulations on your wins with this endearing story. One of my favorite lines is:
the memories were as fresh as a loaf from the oven.
Excellent!