The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/10
Good job. Typical story, but with a nice little twist in the reading part.
04/23/10
Very fun, I enjoyed this. Had a big grin on my face at the end!
An enjoyable read.
04/25/10
At least the library still likes him. Excellent story.
04/26/10
And I thought the topic was
"The Reader," not "The Readers!" I enjoyed the twist in your approach, and how they learned something in spite of themselves.
Thought this was great and had me in anticipation the entire way through! What a unique and great spin with the topic also.
Oooohh this is outstanding. I love the fact the father is still teaching his children a valuable (more valuable than any amount of money)lesson from beyond. This was well written and delightful.
04/29/10
oh wow! I could see this being played out. Congrats on your level placing and Editor's Choice with this super creative entry, Kellie!
Terrific creativity! I think this was one very wise Dad, leaving his kids with something much better than money. Congratulations on your placing in the EC - well deserved!
04/30/10
Congratulations on your EC and level placements with this great story. The title says it all.
04/30/10
You really had me going on this story. Couldn't wait to see what happened. Funny, wisdom is so valuable, but what we would rather have is money. So sad. Congratulations, great entry.
05/11/10
Very well done. Great plot development and characterisation. Enjoy your EC!