The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
Pretty good offering - watch your time shifts.
09/13/05
I liked your descriptions. I could picture the scenes very well!
09/13/05
Good sense of irony, sustained well throughout the entire piece. Well done!
09/14/05
Sounds like fun? Good writing.
09/14/05
Thanks for sharing this perspective with us. Good entry.
09/14/05
I love the message of giving and thankfulness in the middle of disaster. Great, great work.
09/14/05
The irony you use also aptly weaves the feeling of emptiness and loss as well as subdued humor. Maybe I just stated the obvious. I'm still thinking about this one.
09/16/05
A well told, touching story. Yeggy
09/17/05
A wonderfully creative, and lighthearted take on a tragic happening.
09/18/05
I've read this one a couple of times now. It is done quite well. Something about it is moving... the service to God part really works for me. Nice job!