The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/05
Pretty good offering - watch your time shifts.
09/13/05
I liked your descriptions. I could picture the scenes very well!
09/13/05
Good sense of irony, sustained well throughout the entire piece. Well done!
09/14/05
Sounds like fun? Good writing.
09/14/05
Thanks for sharing this perspective with us. Good entry.
09/14/05
I love the message of giving and thankfulness in the middle of disaster. Great, great work.
The irony you use also aptly weaves the feeling of emptiness and loss as well as subdued humor. Maybe I just stated the obvious. I'm still thinking about this one.
09/16/05
A well told, touching story. Yeggy
09/17/05
A wonderfully creative, and lighthearted take on a tragic happening.
09/18/05
I've read this one a couple of times now. It is done quite well. Something about it is moving... the service to God part really works for me. Nice job!