The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/10
This is a beautiful allegory. This sentence has the power to haunt, “I don’t understand why he disguised himself as a poor commoner, subjecting himself to ridicule, insult, and hard labor when he is the son of the king?” Very nice work on this!

04/24/10
I like to be surprised, and you surprised me with the subtle double meanings. Wonderful job!
This is so beautiful. I loved the tones and the message.
Wonderful symbolic representation of the One who became nothing to give us everything.
04/28/10
I loved how you created the sense of allegory and let it sit there without having to expand on every detail. Well done.
Excellent. I was especially impressed with how well you used dialogue/voice to establish characterization for some of the characters.
04/29/10
great job.... I was totally surprised too!