The Official Writing Challenge
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Appreciated the opening dedication, and loved the many word-pictures!
Well done.

I felt as though I traveled with you. Very descriptive.
Very well written. This poem is descriptive and I love the way you used alliteration to emphasise words. Excellant!
This is really well-done; imaginative and evocative, it held me until the very last line.
You have a great meter in this magical fairy-tale. I'd love to see illustrations for this!
Picturesque rhythm and cadence; very skilfully woven, almost audible, material. Excellent work, Joan.
Spellbinding, indeed. Rich and luscious descriptions that carried me away with you.
Beautiful and spellbinding.
How beautiful and uplifting this is. This is such a tribute to your father. It flows with ease and your love is apparent.
oooh, I loved this! I was spellbound by your reader, and it was filled with such sentiment, too.

I hope this does well!
A sense of peace started settling on me as I read this, and deepened throughout. Beautifully, beautifully done, and incredibly well crafted.
Congratulations in placing in the top 40 over-all. Good job! But then you always write the most amazing words!