The Official Writing Challenge
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This held my attention from the first word to the very last. Excellent job.
Great take on the prompt! I enjoyed this one from start to finish. You did a great job developing the characters which can be hard to do with a limited word count.
04/27/10
Great job using the dialogue to introduce the characters to us. The difference in the girls rang very true and brought back memories of my sister and I. Very nice read.
04/27/10
What a wise lady Mrs. Potts is. I enjoyed your story. "P & P" is a favorite book of mine, too. :)
04/28/10
Good Job!
I know a set of twins very much like these two. This story was a great read. Thanks.
Excellent decription.
Congratulations on an excellent story!
04/29/10
Terry, Super congrats on receiving an Editor's Choice award with this wonderful story!
Oh, perfect! You brought the girls to life in a wonderful way! Congratulations on the EC!!!
04/29/10
So realistic and enjoyable! Congratulations on this honor! Well deserved!