The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/10
Such a delightful story! I wanted to hear more about the Reader, such a tantalizing character.
It was a cute story. I noticed a couple of minor typos- you used her instead of He and Nicholas name was spelled differently. I so enjoyed the excitement of the young children. The storyteller was a special character. He won my heart with his evident love for children.
absolutely D-lite-full
04/25/10
Beautifully created, with some echoes of Tom Hanks and Meg Ryans's movie "You've Got Mail."
You've captured the innocence and the adventure that reading opens up for chilldren. Excellent entry.
Congratulations in placing in the top 40 over-all and in the top 15 of your level. Good job!