The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. The ending was great
04/26/10
I loved this beautiful tender moment. (It made me miss my grandkids!) The mood you create and dialog of your characters seem very good! Nice work!
Only from the imagination of a child can we discover such stories. That they were remembered at all is a high salute to the parent(s) that read to them in the first place. Shows a great deal of love in the family. I noticed that you included the title of your story in the body of your article. That's not necessary and it will help with your word count. Great job, nice story.
Congratulations in placing in the top 40 over-all and in the top 15 of your level. Good job!