The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative with so many lessons, and a very lovable MC!
Great story with a lot of old fashioned warm fuzzies ;)
04/23/10
Cute and fun story--loved the twist of fate at the end.
04/23/10
Cute story. I loved the reading dog.
I fell in love with this adorable story.
Hehe, fun story. It would be fun to read a longer version with even more details of the progression of their friendship.
04/24/10
This was such good fun! Enjoyed it!
04/24/10
Wonderful--the kind of story you can get lost in, and don't want to end. Great writing!
04/24/10
The best way to beat your enemy is to befriend them... wonderful story with incredible characters.
04/25/10
Thoroughly enjoyed this charming story.
Enjoyable, homey morality play brought to life with believable dialog and well defined characters. And like any good morality play, there’s a touching lesson that makes the effort well worth reading. Two thumbs WAY up.
Congratulations in placing in the top 40 over-all and in the top 15 of your level. Good job!
05/11/10
Thoroughly enjoyable with delightfully quirky creativity. A most UNUSUAL reader