The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative with so many lessons, and a very lovable MC!
Great story with a lot of old fashioned warm fuzzies ;)
Cute and fun story--loved the twist of fate at the end.
Cute story. I loved the reading dog.
I fell in love with this adorable story.
Hehe, fun story. It would be fun to read a longer version with even more details of the progression of their friendship.
This was such good fun! Enjoyed it!
Wonderful--the kind of story you can get lost in, and don't want to end. Great writing!
The best way to beat your enemy is to befriend them... wonderful story with incredible characters.
Thoroughly enjoyed this charming story.
Enjoyable, homey morality play brought to life with believable dialog and well defined characters. And like any good morality play, there’s a touching lesson that makes the effort well worth reading. Two thumbs WAY up.
Congratulations in placing in the top 40 over-all and in the top 15 of your level. Good job!
Thoroughly enjoyable with delightfully quirky creativity. A most UNUSUAL reader