The Official Writing Challenge
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I like "on wings of words God's spoken" ... many excellent phrases throughout.
I agree with Angela... you have written many wonderful, descriptive phrases. I particularly like the 5th stanza. Unfortunately lost man prefers these many writings of a Utopia to the Word of God, which not only describes an attainable Utopia, but the means through his Son to possess it. Well done with the topic.
Very good. I especially enjoyed the first part. Reading God's word is such a beautiful experience.
Great application of the topic!
You've used a wonderful poetic form (and a challenging one!) This thought caught my attention. "The price for sinís pollution -- Paid in full by Son of Man" Excellent work here!
Congratulations in placing in the top 40 over-all and in the top 15 of your level. Good job!