The Official Writing Challenge
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Another Abe story, same person who did Gettysburg?
Thee poem kept my attention, and I can be childish with my focus. Bravo!
04/27/10
I like the way you emphasized the importance of reading and how God can work in people despite their circumstances. I like the fact that you used a simple poem instead of a story as it let these points stand out instead of getting lost in a story.
I really enjoyed the poem, the lines flowed so beautifully. I am a little confused about who Tom was, but maybe I'm not very good at History. Other than that slight huh on my part, the poem was a beautiful tribute to a great man
Beautiful Writing..