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This is wonderful. I really enjoyed the ending.
This is quite a mystery that kept propelling me forward into the story. Nice work with that.
Whoa! Great story, chilling.
Wow. Good story. Love the ending.
I like how your intense story unfolded. I could feel the girl's desperation and the regret of her father. Good job.
Wow, cool story. I feel like I'm just barely grasping what's going on and not quite understanding fully, but facinating story and loved the way you used the topic.
One of your best entries, in my opinion.
Sara, I'm going to feature this compelling story for the Front Page showcase for the week of May 31. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
WOW girl! This is incredibly powerful piece. SO glad it got the spotlight. Your mind is AMAZING, sweet Sawa!