The Official Writing Challenge
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This is wonderful. I really enjoyed the ending.
04/18/10
This is quite a mystery that kept propelling me forward into the story. Nice work with that.
Whoa! Great story, chilling.
Wow. Good story. Love the ending.
I like how your intense story unfolded. I could feel the girl's desperation and the regret of her father. Good job.
Wow, cool story. I feel like I'm just barely grasping what's going on and not quite understanding fully, but facinating story and loved the way you used the topic.
04/21/10
One of your best entries, in my opinion.
04/27/10
Sara, I'm going to feature this compelling story for the Front Page showcase for the week of May 31. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
06/03/10
WOW girl! This is incredibly powerful piece. SO glad it got the spotlight. Your mind is AMAZING, sweet Sawa!
JJ