The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing, great descriptions and dialog.
04/17/10
Loved the strong ending, and the characterizations were wonderful.
04/18/10
Wonderful story.
04/19/10
Wonderful example of the power of the pen(cil). This is on of my favorites so far.
04/20/10
You drew me into this story with your opening sentence. Then your writing and story propelled me. This is so good and I love the ending. Powerful writing!
04/22/10
Carol, I was so pleased to see this on the Editor's Choice list! Super congrats, friend!
04/22/10
Congratulations on your EC placing - well-deserved!!
04/22/10
Beautifully written - left goosebumps on my arms! Congratulations on your EC, Carol.
04/22/10
Aaaa-mazing. Truly, truly wonderful. Congratulations on your EC placement and on writing such a moving story.
Really excellent writing all the way through, and masterful crafting of the storyline. Just awesomely done. Congrats!
04/23/10
VERY good! This was very moving and excellent writing.
04/23/10
Congratulations Carol.
A fine piece. A real winner!
04/23/10
Truth. What a beautiful ending to a wonderful story.
04/25/10
Very well written, and deserving of the recognition you got from the Editors...This story was intriguing, and a bit hard to comprehend (for me) with just one reading, so I read it a second time. This is good story-telling. It holds the reader, making her/him want to understand it completely. I think I did, at the second reading...And it certainly was on topic. Only it was a "pencil" that was mightier than the sword, not the "pen" (just a PUN!)...This was great...Helen