The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so typical of girls that age. I love it. I really think it is a brilliant example of how kids can treat each other. The message came through loud and clear.
04/15/10
Smile... I love this! You really captured the typical rivalry of 5th grade girls. Well done!
04/16/10
This made me smile! Brilliant! Any of us who have had daughters could just re-live this dialogue!
Very innovative way of telling a story. A fun read! Congrats!
04/24/10
You've captured how intense, how innocent and how volatile childish emotions can be. Brilliant protrayal, and well-deserved recognition by our judging panel. Congratulations.